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The Essence of Time

By: SayuriNakamura
folder InuYasha Crossovers › General
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 1
Views: 3,987
Reviews: 18
Recommended: 0
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Disclaimer: The characters of InuYasha are not mine, they are property of Rumiko Takahashi, Shogakukan, Yomiuri TV, Sunrise, and Viz. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

The Essence of Time

HUGE AUTHORS NOTE...or maybe not so huge. -_-;;

As I was re-reading the chapters of this story, I noticed that though there were some excellent ideas and plotness within, I couldn't believe how Kagome was so...emo. Yes, she was entirely emo. I wanted to cry. I didn't realize how horrid it was until I went back through it. Then, I started to read the comments, and one particular one got to me, however, this particular person was absolutely correct in his/her observations. I have done much better work before. So...until I am satisfied with working out some modifications and take the two chapters I have for this story to the grindstone, this one is being pulled down. Hopefully I can pull my act together for this baby soon and I can repost it; with a less emo Kagome, but still a story all y'all can enjoy. ^_^

It will still remain a Hiei/Kagome story. I want to try and pull one off where she's not getting the best of both worlds. >_>;; It's so hard though, cause I love them both so much, but anyway, here's hoping!

-gives hugs to all-

Thank you all for your patience.

Sayuri-chan~