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for The Essence of Time

by SayuriNakamura

person Megan Consoer
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person crystal
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!! really like your fanfic!!!!
person Animefreak242
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 -Umm... You might want to proof read or get a beta. I don't know if you rushed through this, but there are a lot of mistakes (for one, a 'ningIn' is a carrot, a 'ningEn' is a human; second - a youkai is a demon (you typed 'youkai demon')). They (meaning Kagome and Hiei) were out of character.

This seemed more like those cliche S+K fics where Kagome runs from Inuyasha and Kikyo (after she finds out he 'cheated' on her - though they're not dating...) and magically finds Sesshomaru, whom comforts her, in the forest. Needless to say, I'm surprised. Your other fics were really good. = ( What happened?
person MysticalElf
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!!!
person CM
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YATTA! AWESOME UPDATE! keep up the good work ne?
person Kougalover123
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh i love how you have portrayed hiei in this. is this just a kag/hiei or is there a chance for a kag/hiei/kur? i can't wait to read more please update soon.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, I really like what you are doing with this story. I hope that Hiei comes to remember exactly what it was about her that touched him so long ago. Though I have a feeling it will take a while for him to be able to show her that he does care since he's had five hundred years alone since she had first met him. I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon please.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person MidnightTimberWolf
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet.... I enjoyed reading it.... I hope you continue I would enjoy reading more...