My Beautiful

this is my first fic EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!! but if it sucks please say so


~*My Beautiful*~


They were in a hotel room. It wasnt the nicest of places but it would do for tonight.

"I'm scared" she whispered in his ear.

"It's ok....I'll be gentle, I promise" he whispered back into her ear.

"Will it hurt?" she asked innocently.

He didnt answer and just looked into her eyes.

"Do you trust me?" he asked pleadingly.

"Of co-" She was cut off by his lips on hers. It was a gentle and innocent kiss. And it was so nice.

She loved it, but soon it wasnt enough. She began to deepen the kiss, and he was surprised by her boldness. But he wasnt complaining. Soon enought the kiss got deeper and more hungry. He put his hand under her shirt and began to massage her breast. she let out a surprised gasp into his mouth, but she loved how it felt. He smiled and started to take off her shirt when she stopped him.
He looked at her worridly.

"Whats wrong?" He asked.

She blushed and said,"I'm just a little shy....."

He loved her innosence. "Its ok"

He took off her shirt and looked at her breasts. He was fascinated. She stared getting uncomfortable under his intence stare, and started to cover herself.

He grabbed her wrists to stop her. "Your so beautiful."

"Thank yo-" Once again she was cut off by his lips. Only this time it was needier and deeper.

He took off her pants and panties, and slid his finger into her already moist folds. She broke the kiss and moaned.

"You like that?" he smirked. He slid another finger into her folds and moved the digits in and out.

All she could do was moan. It felt good. So good. But she wanted more.

He took out his fingers and she whimperd at the loss of the sensation. He kissed her jaw line, then her neck and collerbone, and continued going down. He came to her rosy nipple and kissed and licked it. But it didnt take him long to continue moving down. He licked all the ways down her stomach. All the while she was moaning and whimpering. He dipped his tongue into her bellybutton and she let out a sigh. He smiled and went lower. He spread her legs and looked at her velvety wet core. She was soshy and embarrased that she tried to close her legs but he kept them open. he muttered something like 'so beautiful' and put his mouth over her core.

She threw her head back and moaned quite loud. He swirled his tongue around her core and dived in. It was wonderful, for both of them. For her it felt so amazing. She had never felt this before. For him it was the magnifisent taste. She tasted tangy, yet sweet. It was just so.....so....there wasnt even word.

He continued this torture until she couldnt take it anymore. She felt something inside of her snap. She had her orgasm in his mouth. He licked every drop up. He went back up to kiss her so she could taste herself. It felt so erotic.

He broke away from the kiss to take off his clothes. The restrait of his erect member was becoming painful.

As soon as he dropped his underpants she gasped. There was no way that was going to fit inside of her.

He saw the frightened look on her face and gave her a reassuring smile.

"Its going to be okay. I promise."

"Ok...." she said nervously.

He walked back over to her and and kissed her. She leaned into the kiss and moaned.

"I need you.....please....." she said.

He smiled. "i need you too.....so much..."

He began to slide into her and she held her breath.

She was so tight. So amazing. He'd had his share of women but this.....this actually meant something. And she was so fresh, so innocent.

He kept going until he hit her virginity barier. He whispered apologies into her ear and thrust in.

She screamed and a single tear slid out. He kissed it away and waited to move until she was ready.

She dug her nails into his back and waited.....waited for the pain to go away. She decided to take a chance and moved a little. They both moaned. There was no more pain.

He started moving slowly in and out of her, and kissing the hollow of her neck. She had her head back and was moaning loudly. She just couldnt hold in it anymore.

He started thrusting harder and faster.

He grunted when he felt her walls tightening around him. She was so amazing.

She had worked up enough energy to meet his thrusts and was doing it very well.

They were pounding into each other when she felt that snap again.

She screamed his name as she orgasmed again.

He thrust into her a few more times before he came to his own orgasm.

They curled up into each other.

"Koga....?"

"Yes Kagome?"

"Thank you..."

"No thank you....my beautiful"

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so there it was. please review and tell if it sucks, or if it was ok, or whatever just review!