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Category:
InuYasha › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
11
Views:
5,394
Reviews:
102
Recommended:
1
Currently Reading:
1
Disclaimer:
I do not own InuYasha, nor make money from this story.
Chapter 6
A/N: I’ve very mad and thinking about discontinuing this fic because of this review:
“Hey, i read the summary of this fic and thought "hell, this looks really familar," then I read the first chapter and understood why. I have seen this story before, with the same exact scenario, the same exact "green liquid" only it was more fluent and better written. it also happened to be posted on this site a LONG time agoknowknow this is not a original fic, I also know that it is not right to plagirize someones writing. THEY put the effort into creating a story, with a plot they created, to take that away and put your name on it is wrong. Its so wrong that I am not even going to read the rest of this damn fic, because the original was better and this abriged version sucks. You ruined it. I suggest you take this down, or rewrite it so that you do not so OBVIOUSLY steal the plot from another fic. God, the sex scene was even the same, only you took parts out and made it shitty. Get and imagination, get some creativity, do not steal stories from other people. IT IS WRONG. You should be ashamed. And you better hope to god that the REAL author of this fanfic does not find out you plagirized their fanfic. They dont take too kindly to that.”
My response to you, oh so stupid one, is I wasn’t on this site a LONG time ago…I didn’t find out about it until last summer...I was on fanfiction.net where this fic was first put up, but it got kicked off. I must admit though that I read a fic on fanfiction in which the beginning was similar, but the author gave up on it, so I decided to write my own version…This review pissed me off and I think you should think twice before you flame again, you stupid piece of shit…
~*~*~*~*~*~
When Kagome awoke she was not next to the man she had come to love after one night. She was naked in a soft bed. Kagome sat up and looked around.
She gasped at what she saw. She was in a beautifully decorated room. It was circular with many windows. She was sitting in a four poster bed.
There were pictures of exotic places on the walls. Next to the bed was a small night stand.
Also in the room were three doors.
Kagome got out of bed and walked over to these doors. The first one she opened revealed a huge bathroom. In the center of the room, there was a hot tub built into the ground. In a small corner was a toilet. In one corner was a shower and in another was a sink.
There was a small closet in between the shower and the sink which Kagome opened to show towels and soaps.
Next to the closet was another door which Kagome went through and into a huge walk-in closet. There were clothes of all kinds. There were dinner kimonos, casual clothes, and dirty outfits.
Kagome walked back into the bathroom and pulled shampoo, soap, and a towel out of the small closet.
She then proceeded to turn on the hot tub and gently slip into it.
Before this Kagome had been too happy to be here to ask herself how she got here, wherever here was.
'How did I get here? Where is here? Where is Inu Yasha? What happened to Sango?' Kagome though as she washed her long black hair.
She quickly washed her body and hopped out. Kagome wrapped the towel around herself and walked to the closet.
She then picked out a light blue silk kimono to wear. She found a pair of black silk slippers and put them on. She then found a brush and brushed out her wet hair.
The questions that had popped into her head when she was in the hot tub didn't leave her mind. Kagome left the bathroom to try the third door, (the second door led to the walk-in closet).
She put her hand on the handle and threw the door open to reveal..
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
A/N: sorry for the mean cliffie…^_^;;
“Hey, i read the summary of this fic and thought "hell, this looks really familar," then I read the first chapter and understood why. I have seen this story before, with the same exact scenario, the same exact "green liquid" only it was more fluent and better written. it also happened to be posted on this site a LONG time agoknowknow this is not a original fic, I also know that it is not right to plagirize someones writing. THEY put the effort into creating a story, with a plot they created, to take that away and put your name on it is wrong. Its so wrong that I am not even going to read the rest of this damn fic, because the original was better and this abriged version sucks. You ruined it. I suggest you take this down, or rewrite it so that you do not so OBVIOUSLY steal the plot from another fic. God, the sex scene was even the same, only you took parts out and made it shitty. Get and imagination, get some creativity, do not steal stories from other people. IT IS WRONG. You should be ashamed. And you better hope to god that the REAL author of this fanfic does not find out you plagirized their fanfic. They dont take too kindly to that.”
My response to you, oh so stupid one, is I wasn’t on this site a LONG time ago…I didn’t find out about it until last summer...I was on fanfiction.net where this fic was first put up, but it got kicked off. I must admit though that I read a fic on fanfiction in which the beginning was similar, but the author gave up on it, so I decided to write my own version…This review pissed me off and I think you should think twice before you flame again, you stupid piece of shit…
~*~*~*~*~*~
When Kagome awoke she was not next to the man she had come to love after one night. She was naked in a soft bed. Kagome sat up and looked around.
She gasped at what she saw. She was in a beautifully decorated room. It was circular with many windows. She was sitting in a four poster bed.
There were pictures of exotic places on the walls. Next to the bed was a small night stand.
Also in the room were three doors.
Kagome got out of bed and walked over to these doors. The first one she opened revealed a huge bathroom. In the center of the room, there was a hot tub built into the ground. In a small corner was a toilet. In one corner was a shower and in another was a sink.
There was a small closet in between the shower and the sink which Kagome opened to show towels and soaps.
Next to the closet was another door which Kagome went through and into a huge walk-in closet. There were clothes of all kinds. There were dinner kimonos, casual clothes, and dirty outfits.
Kagome walked back into the bathroom and pulled shampoo, soap, and a towel out of the small closet.
She then proceeded to turn on the hot tub and gently slip into it.
Before this Kagome had been too happy to be here to ask herself how she got here, wherever here was.
'How did I get here? Where is here? Where is Inu Yasha? What happened to Sango?' Kagome though as she washed her long black hair.
She quickly washed her body and hopped out. Kagome wrapped the towel around herself and walked to the closet.
She then picked out a light blue silk kimono to wear. She found a pair of black silk slippers and put them on. She then found a brush and brushed out her wet hair.
The questions that had popped into her head when she was in the hot tub didn't leave her mind. Kagome left the bathroom to try the third door, (the second door led to the walk-in closet).
She put her hand on the handle and threw the door open to reveal..
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
A/N: sorry for the mean cliffie…^_^;;