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by PharaohsBeloved

schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you updated i'm happy!!! also yay lemoney!!! oh and i love this fic even though it's very dark and erotic
person Kozuka
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You put a pathetic amount of effort into this fic. You're worthless, bitch.
person Tom
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Semper Fi
person fox_demon_hotty
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so far the story is ok, but i just wish you update more often. i started reading this awhile ago. i think at the begining of summer. other than that, like i said, the story is ok. i read worse, but i read alot better too.
person Just another fan
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!!! I think it would be an excellent movie. It could even be the next Inuyasha movie....lol! Any way good story.
person Neko~Yasha
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this about a year ago ......
U keep pouring me only half a lemonade .....im still thirsty!!!
In short UPDATE OFTEN
person Hillary
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY BUT SHORT
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yaya you updated i like this story,
i'm glad that im able to review cause the site is always so busy that i can never get a chance to review.
but now that the webmaster fix it, i can review
good job on this one
cant wait for the next one
person 545
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its Great!!
person Tom
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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