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for Lost Love

by Andiee

person Besarta
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, sad. I was crying my eyes out. =( Keep up the fantastic work because you're a great writer, no doubt about that.
person Ann
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was soooo sad i started to cry and i just cloud not stop i glad Sango had Miroku's baby but sad that he died becuse of Naroku i fill sooooooo sorry for snago keep it up
person dragonflyelj
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Only one bit of constructive critisism: the part where she was being controlled by Naraku was a little confusing, other than that, the story was great! I normally don't like a fic like this, but you pulled it off really well. Thank you for sharing it :-)
person Cristy
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omg... that was so sad!!! I liked it so much!! If you make another chapter, you should make Miroku's soul go into his child... and he could start remembering his past. I know it would be weird and it's probably a stupid idea. But you are such a good writer!!
person animechick262003
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't read this one. This is sooo sad. Anyways thanks for sharing. Good Job!!
person stayingput29
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh... Se I k I knew I wouldn't be disapointed... Good Job... I think this ones my fav...