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for unbreakable

by kaotixkry

person Deb.23
schedule April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is good except i wanted to ask you.. why do you write about rape? Being raped is not something people enjoy reading... i am stupid and Sessh was gentle to Kag and that was why I liked the story.. but why do you write about rape? Its disgusting and bad and something no one deserves..
person nari-chan
schedule December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
its ok im just happy to see to see that you are still around and updating. i will check out the new story :)
your awesome and i thank you for posting this story please keep up the good work.
person nari-chan
schedule November 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i loved the 2 update!!
and i think if you want to do a hardcore rape chapter with inuyasha/kogame and naraku/kogame. go for it :) let the inner beast out fully ;)
please continue this story. you are a wonderful writer and i am enjoying this story so much i look everyday to see if you updated.
i appreciate you writing this and would be vary disappointed if i didn't find out what was going to happen to kogame and her rapist.
i am hooked so please continue to give me my fix of this story.:)
person nari-chan
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i loved the update.
i like that fluffy mated to her, i think that he will grow to like her and accept her as his mate just like his demon.
now that she can speak it will get interesting.... how will fluffy and his demon react to her sad tale of rape and heart break?
i like stories where she gives him his arm back :) i always feel bad for him not having it :(
well please UPDATE again soon i cant wait to read more :)
person nari-chan
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was brutal and i kina liked it. inuyasha is a fool, but he may learn the truth and have regrets who knows.... i liked the last 2 posts and please keep them coming ! i cant wait to read what is next
person nari-chan
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
more please........