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August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is cute! Don't leave me hanging. I hope this updates soon!
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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely on love with this story, please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so good!!!! Please update soon, I keep checking to make sure I haven't missed anything!
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November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. I liked your writing style and thought it flowed well. There might have been one or two grammar mistakes, but I didn't notice any spelling/punctuation errors, which is a huge plus. I'm notoriously snobby about that sort of thing. My A.D.D. need to correct mistakes completely distracts me from the story, which no author should want to happen, and the fact that I didn't really stumble upon anything is very refreshing.
I enjoyed the dialogue between Inu/Kag and thought you built the flirty chemistry between them well. I can't really think of any cons. I thought it was a short N sweet introduction to a nice slice of life story and look forward to your future chapters and to see how you develop the plot. Good job and keep it up :)
I enjoyed the dialogue between Inu/Kag and thought you built the flirty chemistry between them well. I can't really think of any cons. I thought it was a short N sweet introduction to a nice slice of life story and look forward to your future chapters and to see how you develop the plot. Good job and keep it up :)
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You NEED to write another chapter!!!!!
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August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Can't wait for another chapter, please updatte soon!
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy (and you should be too lol) to say that I'm glad your story was the first AFF that I read (Inu and Kag that is). It is so hard trying to find some Inuyasha and Kagome fanfic! I'm very much new to this site but not fanfiction. Please update soon. :)
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far update soon!!!
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! I think is a very good start and can't wait to see where this goes. I hope u update pretty fast it would suck to wait months for an update I might die of anticipation before the next chapter, and love ur writing keep it up!!!
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue I love it so far. Please please update soon.