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for The Jackal God's Desire

by AmberDDawn

person harpergunbunny
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good start with short sections that set a fast mood. I hope the next update reveals more about the direction of the story.
person Vyper
schedule May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. I hope you write more and soon.
schedule May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... very interesting!

I look forward to more of this! Keep up the good work!!

I hope we see some smex! :)