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for The Jackal God's Desire

by AmberDDawn

person Kiochii
schedule October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
all I have to say is WHY IS IT ONLY TO FOUR CHAPTERS!! HOLY SMOKES! Bada bap bap ba~ I'm lovin' it~
ok all funnies aside seriously this story has me hooked and I cant wait to see what happens next. That Jackal god is strong and terrifying.
Poor sesshy cant see what is happening. Cant wait for more.
person guest
schedule September 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really hope you update date this story because i really like the plot and how everything is coming along and i REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO INUYASHA!!!~
person Mughain
schedule June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I've never read anything quite like this. It's very interesting, well written, and I can't wait to read more!
schedule June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update!! I want to know what happens next!! Please?!
person jdbbrz27
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This sounds well fascinating to say the least first I've read of the Jackel God. To have a god and his powerful brother both of whom are indifferent and cruel and mean in their own ways going after our poor sweet innocent little Inuyasha who will break his cherry first I wonder and how will he react to this kind of insanity because both of them are basically crazy over power and controlling people and things. Poor sweet Inu the last thing he wants is to be controlled and yet he can have power over these two powerful beings but will he want to and for that matter it's a sexual power from the sounds of it does he really want that kind of power cause either way he gets it in the end. This really sounds like it could be an amazing story could you email me when you have the next chapter out my email is brzachman@yahoo.com
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is really frickin' good. I want more! It is so well written, I can't wait to find out what happens next. Poor Inuyasha tehee :)
person kristig
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have thoroughly enjoyed the story so f ar. Hope you keep it up especially with the action. Love to see Sess get pissed!!!
person wolfluv
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!! I am so happy to see this wasn't abbondoned I had read this a while ago and I am VERY HAPPY to see it being added to. I like the premis of this story and the diffent cultures and Sess's inate ablity to try and figure out what he really wants and feels! Thank you for bitching about the necklace too! I look forward to reading where this is going! read ya later
person kma3000
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting! I hope you update soon!
person Saydenemery
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic so far. Hope to see more. Glad to see Sesshoumaru is staying true to himself and developing in a realistic way.