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by Crazedlemonlover

person chancelor22
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE tell me that is not finished! that was wonderfully written. i must have more! *fans self*
person Fab
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was great hopefully I can read more soon
person OtakuSIG
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woooow...! Sooo good! Your writing is very beautiful. I can't wait to read more.
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is written absolutely beautifully. Very entrancing, I hope to see an update soon.
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks guys! I love hearing your reviews. Sorry it took so long to update! I had the chapter written right after I first put up the story and kept revising it! I'm almost done with the third chapter. This is just my first story, and I'm going crazy trying to do write the way Miroku and Sango feel without over doing it. I love Miroku and Sango and I'd like to try and attempt to do them some justice.
person Vyper
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Miroku cracks me up even in this story. He is such a pervert, but at the same time it is right that he wants to be with Sango just in case they don't survive the fight against Naraku. I just hope Sango has no regrets and that Miroku doesn't fuck this up with Sango since she is special and not just some quick lay for him to sate his lust.
person OtakuSIG
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woow you updated!!

How beautiful, you expressed Miroku's feelings in a very touchy way. I liked it.

I'll be waiting for the next one ^^
person OtakuSIG
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great beginning! I wish you'll update the next chapter really soon :):) I love Sango and Miroku sooo much!
person Vyper
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far this is pretty good. I love seeing Sango and Miroku together as a couple since the two of them are so perfect for each other. I look forward to your next update.