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Oh please update soon! I'm so said she lost him! But it's such an amazing idea I look forward to reading more! N

OMG What a tease!?!? That was such a little chappie I thing I might cry! Greedy aren't I? Anyways... I am, glad tp see that her body is regretting someone that's not her mate, I was hoping for that. Good she's coming to her senses. Still don't like this guy, don't trust him. He's shady. It's funny, Sesshy is going to promote her all the way up to Lady of the Palace isn't he? That is a tricky way of doing it. Just guessing. Anyways, longer chapter please! Thank you!

Takumi is really pushing his luck with pursuing Ayame. The guy is going to get himself killed and Ayame isn't helping the situation. I really hope that Ayame will come to understand that Sesshoumaru is her mate and eventually give into him since they are pretty much stuck together for life.

Takumi is going to die. That is all there is to it. Ayame is going to probably get in deep trouble with her mate too. I doubt Sesshoumaru is going to put up with Ayame's stuborness for long. Eventually she will have to submit to him and it will be interesting when that happens.

The Final Act was really great. It sure was nice to finally finish the anime. But your story doesn't need to follow it by any means. At least half the stories on this site don't. Call it an Author's right. :) I don't think I like this new wolf demon. Something doesn't seem right with him, like he's not trustworthy. Maybe that cause he's trying to take another mans, SESSHY'S, woman! Gotta hand it to him, he's got a big pair to try that one.

That wolf demon may be a hottie, but no one compairs to Sesshoumaru. Ayame better be careful since she wouldn't want her wolf friend to get killed by her mate.

Quite a few spelling and grammar errors here. You might want to give it a double run over and maybe get someone to beta before submitting. I also feel the need to ask you to read the manga and watch InuYasha: Final Act too. (No offence.)

Apart from that I find it a some what interesting read. Keep it up.

I am also waiting for Inuyasha the Final Act to be in English so I can buy it and add it to my collection. I also need to buy the manga's and the anime books. I have a few, but not all of them yet. I know you can watch Inuyasha the Final Act on hulu in Japanese with English subtitles and if you do you will love the voice of Sesshoumaru's Mother. She is such a cute litte demoness it is hard not to love her although my heart, mind, and soul belongs to Sesshoumaru.
Anyway, great chapter and I think it is nice that Sesshoumaru is giving Ayame a sword. I think that was a good way to woo her. I also think that wolf demon is going to get killed if he doesn't leave Ayame alone. The guy is really going to push up daisies if he thinks that he can get away with flirting with Ayame like he does and if he takes her virginity I don't think there will be enough body parts left of him when Sesshoumaru finds out.

I am suprised that Sesshoumaru would walk away from his mate so easily. He had every chance to make Ayame his when she was bathing. Perhaps when Ayame has to patition the "Western Lord".....LOL.......he will have the chance to woo her properly.

Cool, I wasn't expecting it to be Sesshomaru's palace. Don't know why I didn't see that one coming... Very Funny Chapter!