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Great Chapter! I can't wait for chapter two.

There were a few errors, such as using a semicolon instead of a colon, some spelling errors, and usage of the wrong words that may have sounded similar to the right ones. For example: Sesshomaru pushed "straineds" of hair out of his face, though it should be "strands". I find the story quite interesting, however, especially with that naughty cliffhanger! =) I'm curious to see what happens next, and also hope you go a little more into the fates of Inuyasha and Kagome's other friends. Looking forward to more!