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for Blinding the Consequences

by Mort

schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm enjoying this very much =)
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this.
person natasha
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh it was a wonderful chappie love em long and detailed. can't wait for more to come.
person niceladysakura
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!

i was really really waiting for this story to update, finally they are somehow safe inside the castle, i just hope that sooner or later inuyasha will remember sesshomaru and that he will not be frightened anymore by the mere presence of the other..

i am really hoping that whoever capture inuyasha will feel sesshomaru's wrath!

is it naraku that kidnapped inuyasha?

please update soon!
person Princess Sin
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is great and i can't wait until the next
chapter. so, who did take inuyasha? will we find out in the
next chapter? and will we find out why he was taken in
the first place?
person Jaguarsgirl85
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the second Chappy....a little on the Cliffy side Tho! AHHHHHH Can't wait to find out who took him and how. KEEP WRITING YOUR DOING WONDERFUL!!!!!!
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH wow please update soon I'm loving this fic.
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well first it's a good start and has the reader wanting to know why was Inuyasha taken, how he was treated for all those years, who took him, what was up with the guide and what's going to happen next. The only problems I see are grammar and speeling (spelling). See if you can fix these and you should be good to go.
person natasha
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great story line. just loved it, hope you write more to it.