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Please update and send me a notice when u do

Hey there I hope you are well,it has been forever since I have read this story. I ccan't believe it and a whole chapter I have never read to boot. I still love this story. Good to go back to read old classics. Do you have this did finish on another site, would love to continue on reading if possible. Sorry for a nagging I don't mean too.
Ladytokyo aka Shivonne

Please finish this great story.

I found you again!!!!!!!!!!!!! you don't know how exciting that is for me. Ok Ssssssoooooooo now that I'm back and have found you again hows about another chapter. I still really really like this story you have written, consitdering that I just hardcore re-read all 6 chapters so please update for me.... O_O

I love this story.

Any editing or grammar mistakes are easily ignored, because your story has substance. There is a clear plot that has been given some thought. I like that. It's different compared to the many fics that read like a child wrote them. I do recommend that you find a beta though. There have been many times when you've used the wrong word in a sentence that is a little confusing. Also, I agree with the person that reviewed before me. You mentioned a sexual encounter between InuYasha and Sesshoumaru, but you never wrote it? I don't know what happened. Perhaps you could go back and edit chapter 6 and add in that part? All in all, I like this fic a lot. I think you've done a great job and I can't wait for more updates.

OH thank you so very much I enjoyed this a great deal and happy to read another chapter from you and this fic. Thank you for updating I can't wait for the next chapter whenever that is. Oh wait I have a questions. Will the sage be allow to attend this function to scent out auras? And what does Inuyasha want for himself? Hum I think that's it. Till next time I shall be waiting for another chapter.
ladytokyo

I really like your story, but I think you left something out. In chapter 6 at the beginning it hints that Sesshomaru had sex with Inuyasha. But, in chapter 5 all Sesshomaru was doing was going to bed. A whole section is missing. How did they have sex when sex wasn't even on Sesshomaru's mind?

Please update soon it's awesome

I absolutely enjoyed this story. I really like the progression of it and it is all around an interesting and original piece of fan fiction. I truly hope you will write more of this story. I wish to know what happens next. I have a guess as to the bad guy, is it Onigumo? Anyway, I look forward to reading more of this fan fiction soon! Please update this story soon! I really really want to know what happens next!