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person eglenn
schedule September 23, 2019 at 12:00 AM

PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON!  

schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow this is so good! it amazing! i hope you will update soon!
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update soon i'm curious to see what will happen next
person estelin
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more. cant wait to see the relationship between sess and kag grow. are sess and everyone normal people or are they demons and stuff
person HollySue
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, when are you gonna up-date? No pressure just can't wait.
holly
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love. and cookies..

i give this story my devotion and i give u cookies for uploading soon and writing an amazing fic. write more soon! try and read my stories too. u dont have to but it would be nice. but upload soon, thats the main story here. upload. for the love of cookies.

psychoticly- ADT
person snowbird
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought I'd give your story a try and see where you go with this plot. With all the cooking she did in their travels, I'm surprised more writers do not place her as a chef in more stories. Oh well, it makes it more unique for you.

I have a question about Inuyasha's and Sesshoumaru's last name. You referred to Sesshoumaru as Lord, using the English word, and sama which also translates as lord. You had Kagome call him sama on the phone. Should she not have used his last name?
person Denara88
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter

i look forward to reading more
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going..........
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see where you take this.