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I love it. Hardly anyone writes about ah un and not as a central character. Fantastic.

fantastic story!!

I hope you make a sequal to this story i'll love to read it.you are very good with your stories. please do more.and keep up the great work

Too bad the story had to end. I would love to have read about the birthing of all the pups and the mayhem they cause. I still enjoyed this story immensely.

ah, confusion is fun lol

You picked the perfect mate for Inuyasha. Juria is more than capable of keeping him in line. With all of them together and freshly mated, (soon Inuyasha and Juria will join the ranks) all sorts of crazy and funny things are taking place. There is never a dull moment at the House of the Moon. haha. I find myself having a good chuckle here and there.

The more I read, the more I love this story. Sesshoumaru's and Kagome's love for each other is so beautiful and the way they've opened up to each other only brings them closer. It's terrible what his father put him through and Isayoi was just as bad. I'm happy that Kitaro and Sango are building a relation with each other even if it is challenging at times between them. Their teasing each other is harder on Kitaro, though. hahaha. Sango needs to take pity on him and replace the pond with herself. What a pleasant shock that would be for him. I don't think she really loved Miroku that deeply. She was around him all the time and her friendship for him led to an attraction that with his persistence could have been mistaken for love. So what she's beginning to feel for Kitaro is the real thing. I just have to give you a big verbal hug for not matching Miroku and Sango together like 99% of the stories do. This is so REFRESHINGLY BEAUTIFUL what you've done with them. I'm even happy for Miroku. His silliness landed him a wonderful mate. Now there's Inuyasha, poor guy. I hope there's not a big personality change in him when he wakes up except for that one thought he had back of this about Kagome's death and her soul. Of course, as I said before, I blame that on Kikyou and her potion which I'm happy, happy to say is no more. Thank you Ah and Un. Now maybe Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru can slowly start to be brothers. There has to be some female out there for Inuyasha, too. Everyone else is getting laid and mated so we can't leave him out. haha. Thank you for all the chapter updates.

I love this story! Maybe you should give Shippo 2 smiles!

I'll say it again. I LOVE THIS STORY! Kitaro is just what Sango needs. He'll soon have her saying, "Miroku who?" with eyes and a heart only for him. I had to laugh when she flattened Miroku. Can't wait for Inuyasha and Miroku to learn their little 'lie' has turned into truth. Let's see if Inuyasha can take it like a grown-up or throw a childish tantrum.

I just discovered this story and read it straight through. I'm fascinated by it. I have never read a plot where Ah and Un have been used in such a way. It's about time they got a starring role. I was proud of Inuyasha for being so grown-up to take control of things in his brother's absence except for one thing which I blame on Kikyo's potion. His thought about Kagome's possible death and her soul going to Kikyo. That just seemed so out of place for him to think considering his new grown-up attitude and his protectiveness towards Kagome. I think you did a hilarious justice to the monk. It's about time some female took him up on his question. haha. I had to laugh. I just hope he eventually remembers his 'wedding' night. Maybe the next time they rut, it will return to him. Also, I give you a great big thank you in regards to Sango. It would seem that Kitaro is very interested in her and by her actions, she is attracted to him also. She just doesn't know it yet. I thank you because she is rarely mated with anyone except Miroku which I find boring. She's a warrior and deserves a youkai as a mate. I love her character as much as I do Kagome's. Hopefully she'll take Miroku's mating more calmly than he fears. Now I have to impatiently wait for the next update.