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schedule
May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If this is the best you can do, then you REALLY shouldn't write.
schedule
May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Um.. yeah not sure how I want to review this. It wasn't my cup of tea but then a lot of things I write are not everyones cup of tea. There was a lot of gore, which is okay if you like gore, and I do-- but perhaps some editing would make it flow better and make it easier to read.