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This looks like a promising beginning.  I know it has been years since you updated, but I hope you will come back to this and finish it!

I'll offer myself up as a beta if Your still in need of one. drop me an email.

this is a good story so far, i hope you update it soon. is this on any other sites...maybe ones that have auto notification when it's updated?

I love this fanfic! The only thing that sucks about it though is the grammar and spelling errors you have in it. If you don't start checking your work before posting your fanfic will not be great at all...it isn't now, but it could be really great. Just look over your work before posting and everything will be great.^^ Update soon. Thanks.

ooohhh i hope you update this one soon. so very intruiguing. lol. hope to see more.
Ja
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
Eternity
Sakura Dimentia Winner
Sinopa Ariyaana
YokoSakura
Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Asai

I really like it so far. It's sweet and romantic already, and the two groups haven't even met yet! @_@ *subliminal message - KurKags 4eVA!!!* @_@ I'm excited to read more.