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for A Night to Remember

by bluedragonkai

schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting three chapters you have here.
It's kind of wierd seeing Sesshamaru in a
college scene being a thousand years old...
I like that he's interested in Kagome
however. This Tai guy seems like a dick. At
first I thought it was going to be Inuyasha
with some fucked up personality due to
No Kagome. Well, the mind wanders. Continue
on. It's captured my attention!
person snowbird
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very cute except for Tai, of course. He's determined to get her alone. I agree, she does need to brush up on her miko powers for more reasons than she knows. I absolutely love how you wove in that she's still a virgin. (thank you, thank you) I just knew Sesshoumaru would salivate over that. heehee. It's cute and funny that her three friends are playing matchmakers and he's letting them help him. I know Tai is after her but if they keep interfering with his attempts to be with her, he might just get it into his head to get even by kidnapping one of them. I hope they're all careful around him.
person shadednight
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh!!! i like how this story twist. hope you writr more soon! ;)
person snowbird
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes!!! So far so good. I think I'm going to like this story. She did the dumbest no no by going back to an abandoned drink and drinking it! Stupid, stupid. You never, ever do that. She had best dust the rust off her miko powers and start sensing the auras around her. If her's had been working, she would have sensed the danger in this psychopath Tai. But then again she was distracted by her anger with Sesshoumaru and being late to class. She had a right to be angry at him for what he said to her that morning. Even if he wasn't attracted to her body, he could have been more polite. What he said was downright insulting and hurtful. I guess, though, he was getting back at her for the way she said what she did to him. So it would seem they're even. She needs to stop and remember that. I hope she's still a virgin and you didn't let her have various affairs like some writers do. Why is it so hard to hold onto something that's precious? I'm not that young and I held onto mine for a long time until the right person. Just call me overly romantic but I firmly believe that Kagome's innocence belongs only to Sesshoumaru. I guess you probably think I'm old fashioned. Anyway, I'm curious to see how you weave their relationship while they interact with each other.