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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Look.
I wasted time on this story.
Where is the adult content >.>?
I wasted time on this story.
Where is the adult content >.>?
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just finished the last three
chapters you put up, and I liked them.
I kind of wished there was more to it
but all together it was a good story.
I kind of felt bad for Tai at that point.
I mean, the guy had total reason for
wanting to get his vengence. I'd try to
torment anyone that killed my mate too.
I don't know. -Sigh.- I'll have to see
what else you've written. Thanks for the story.
chapters you put up, and I liked them.
I kind of wished there was more to it
but all together it was a good story.
I kind of felt bad for Tai at that point.
I mean, the guy had total reason for
wanting to get his vengence. I'd try to
torment anyone that killed my mate too.
I don't know. -Sigh.- I'll have to see
what else you've written. Thanks for the story.
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, it ended? :(, that was socute! great job
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is great!
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great fic so far. little gory but nice.
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cliffy, Cliffy, oh my whats gonna happen next? please update soon, but no rushing...lol. Happy early birthday to u and I love this story, and i dont want u to rush the ending cause i want it to be good. Update...Soon!!!!
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon. i want to know what happens.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty good story, one little problem i have is that she was so upset about not being able to see inuyasha, and as soon as she th9ught she possibly saw him in the bar she went running, so it doesnt make any sense that the second she runs into see that shes not awsking questions about what happened to inuyahsa and her friends. maybe you arent telling the reader what happened becuase it aids ur plot, but the fact is it's just not realistic.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok this story was great, it actually moved alot faster than i thought it would, and the storyline is great, only the part where seshy sung, threw of my chair in shock..lol. So please keep it coming, and keep up the good work.