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for The First Impulse

by SayuriNakamura

person snowbird
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I love this first chapter. So intense and deep! Only one other story did I start to read that involved Sesshoumaru torturing Kagome. Sad to say that author never went beyond that one chapter and abandoned the story. I begged and pleaded to no avail. I hope that doen't happen here. I would very much like to see this story continue. I know there will be a long healing process for Kagome in body and mind. Also, Sesshoumaru will have to do some healing as he mourns the loss of Rin and his guilt over what he has done to Kagome. I hope you update soon. Just PLEASE don't do like that other author.
person Anon
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You take way to long to update. bye.