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i can't wait to read more. :) Hope you update soon

Holding fans hostage for reviews isn't the way to go about things... If you can't do the story for yourself and not the ego stroke don't write.

I think that you ought to write some more on this one, it's a new spin on it. The whole two annoying ones being perfect for each other could really get funny. I think that it has a lot of potential. An encouragement: write what you like, don't wait for reviews or the acceptance of others to continue. Let your work stand for what it is regardless of what others think. Finish the story the way you want it whether you get one more review or not. Also, if you are going to have your original character in the rest of the story, you might want to giver her a name and some characteristics. Other than screechy voice and concubine like we don't know how she is annoying. Sorry for long review, just wanted to help.
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