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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly beautiful!
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Writing of this quality is hard to come by. Excellent use of language (and thankfully no spelling/grammar issues... not that I noticed). A story told from his point of view is hard to find, much less such a beautiful lemon. Thank you for sharing this gem with us readers/writers. I feel inspired.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. Wonderful job.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was perfect!!!! Beautiful and so mature big 5 star to you
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story was absolutely inticing!!!!!!!! it was pure poetry; gorgeous and enchanting!!! keep writing, you have a gift!!!!!
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i freaking love this story so sweet and sesshomura is just so got darn handsome to boot rin is a lucky bitch
(pardon the pun.)
(pardon the pun.)
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet!! ^^
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was very sweet, and softly done.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! This is so good....I wish there was a way to see them mated in the manga, but I know it's going to end as soon as Naraku dies.... Thanks a lot for this oneshot!!! Please write more!!!
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was very beautiful. I really enjoyed the flow and ending, very intuitive.