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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed it so far want to read more please update soon TTFN Marrosa
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you have an interesting beginning. The flow is very good however, it might help a little to either indicate why he has waited so long to find her or why he cares to see her. I will look for when you update again.
Emily
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow ,this sound powerful I would love to read more and how she came to be in the mental hospital.