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by oddball88

schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn . . that was a good one, really hot! :)
person orvida
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what a great ending to a great story i hope to read more of your stories were ever you post at.
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes is was worth the wait. looking forward to more.
person orvida
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well hot dam when's the next update that was smokinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn and so darn hooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttt. I could have fried eggs on it.after reading this part i am highly anticipating your next post? asap
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can realy see that happen. that waould be a great way to end it. next one should be great to see how he express is feelings to her. up-date soon.
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not fair it was just getting hott.