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for Run

by missiemae

person LOVETTE
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUEEE LOVINGGG ITT
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good if some what confusing, you have to update soon.
person Dawn
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it i cant wait to see what willhappen next!!!
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, please write more. ;)
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
there is a whole lot of action and suspense. i'm in suspense because i don't know what's going on but i would like to know and i want to see where you're taking this story. the background...

it's well written, it captivates and intrigues.

thank you,
ginny
person Little Jack 2
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next and why everyone was calling Kagome a whore.Why were they calling her a witch and a whore?
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What was there was intriguing. I would really like to see more of it though. There really isn't enough to create more of an opinion with this particular opening.

Good job so far though!
person Midoriko
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! even If I didn`t understand a thing xD please update soon!!

See ya!!

Midoriko-sama