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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well it was a "good story" except for the whole rushed thing I mean it was nice but you rushed it I mean it would have been better if it had spread out over a couple of chapters but other than that I liked it.
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February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked the plot and all, and it was a very sweet story. The only problem I had with it, was it went a little too fast. Other than thus, it was very good and well-written. Keep up the great work!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I totaly loved it
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked it and i think you should keep going. i mean you dont have to, but it is really good so why stop?
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I loved this so much. I think you should turn it into a full out story. It would so kick ass if it was. I truly hope you continue with this. Good luck if you do, and if you don't then oh well it's still good.