rate_review Reviews

I think that the premise of the story is awesome! Besides that, I would just advise spell checking it and looking over the story for grammatical errors, but nonetheless, it was a wonderful first chapter! Kudos!

That was good! Sad, but good. I'm glad she didn't say anything to Yusuke, though, -- no point in BOTH of them being miserable. For a second there, with her and the hot bath and everyone else feeling cold to her, I was beginning to wonder if she was actually Kikyou, and not really ALIVE. The truth was actually sadder. she tried to move on, but she never really will. *sigh* Very poignant.

it's hard being where you don't want to be and it's too late to change it. poor yasha, poor kagome... she can however make the best of it because she's committed to this marriage and there's children. one word though (actually two) BIRTH CONTROL!!