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for Falling Away

by Onyxlight

schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter. nice to see Kouga and Inu becoming friends. love the interaction with sango.
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far.. you have an interesting plot going on here so I hope you keep writing.
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O.... inu behind her.. or someone else? Sorry I haven't been reviewing much lately but I kinda lost your story. loving it still and I hope to see a new chapter soon. I love what you've done with Miroku's wind tunnel. I have a feeling he'd almost feel incomplete without it... even if he did fear it at some point. Kagome still pissing everyone off... what a shocker! I do love that Sango, Miroku, and Shippou are at least trying to make Inu feel better. Is he planning on going to Sesshy's? Well, hope to see more soon!!!! Later hon!
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, i hope you update it soon. are they going to make kagome remove the beads and then go back home and seal the well behind her? or can others like kaede or miroku remove the beads?
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Darling lol Well I didn't realise you'd posted here as well. And you know I dont really send you reviews as such, since I tell you in the emails how wonderful your story is ^_^ Just want to remind you of that again. I think I'm quite a few more chapters ahead in reading than the chapters that are here ne? Anyways, it was fun to re-read them again ^_^ Your Sesshomaru is my favourite I think, It's the words you give him, or more accurately the way he (you) use them. Alot of people have used this plot (the destined thing) But your take on it is so much better, a new twist (or plenty of new twists) I do feel sorry for Miroku in this though you meanie XD But I know what happens past this chapter so there, lol. Dont worry, I'm a bit hyper from energy drinks XD SO hope you enjoyed my random review sweetie, good luck with the writing. Speak to you through email when the next chapter is ready, KK? *Huggles* Love Shigure-san x chuu x
person Henako
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Feel special dear.
I got an account, SIMPLY to review your story.
I love it.
Good to say it now.
Kagome is suddenly so rascist.
She's never been my favoriate
But I never hated her.
I think I do now XD
The dark side of Kagome!?!
XDDD
I certainly hope you update soon. Do not forget us
~Harlequin, Masked Deciever
person Aini
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...this is turning out to be most interesting...I can't WAIT for more! :D
person BatmanYaoi
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!! MY STUPID INTERNET CUT ME OFF RIGHT AS I WAS ABOUT TO SEND THIS REVIEW!!! T_T So if you get this again sorry! As I was saying... THIS IS THE BEST INU/SESS I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME!! Keep it up because I want more!!! (though feel free to update at your own pace) I can't wait until the next chapter and all I have to say now is GO SANGO HIT HER AGAIN!!
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!!! go Sango! love this story!!! it's so well written and Kagome always bugged me. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I wanna know what happens!!!! PLEASE!!!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slap her again!! She is so going back to the future or die in the past! Love your story, keep up the great work.