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for Falling Away

by Onyxlight

person SP777
schedule November 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #23...

I like this! :-)
It's really well told, at this point in the story I'm not sympathizing with Mirouku, he had his
chance to say how he felt & missed it...now get over it. I thought the monk had more sense than that.
person L
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
person Deehay
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn you for that cliffy... I was really into the story too... But anyways... It's really good update soon
person Rihou
schedule May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I hope you continue to write it and update it.
person Redisroses
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking the story. Can I have more now?
person Vyper
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It will be fun to find out how Sesshoumaru and Kouga are going to play as canines. It should be interesting.
person Vyper
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Miroku since he is in love with Inuyasha, but I am glad it is Sesshoumaru who Inuyasha wants. It will be interesting to see the ways that Sesshoumaru will show Inuyasha how much he means to him.
person Vyper
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story so far. I look forward to your next update.
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i have to say i am enjoying this story its smoothly written with a great plot. there are no hiccups that trip you up while reading and the story keeps you reading till the end. cant wait to see where you take this.
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just found this tonight. Could not stop reading. Poor Miroku, I feel sorry for him. And what a turn - Kagome is now tainting the jewel with her batty (plus some) behavior. Excellent story! Very well written, good flow, lots of plot depth, can't wait for more. Please update soon.