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by WalterKraken101

person Reaper
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!? Why would you end that chapter there?
PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS DARK AND BRUTAL UPDATE SOON!
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a great day.
person Inuyasha
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHY'S IT ALWAYS GOTTA BE A MUTHAFUCKIN' RAPE IN THESE STORIES!?!

Oh well, I must admit, it is one hell of a story. I mean, damn, he killed a cop! I HATE COPS! But DAMN! I wouldn't go and kill one of em', that's just askin' for more trouble!

I WANNA SEE HOW IT ENDS!

Please update as soon as you're able to!
person Inu-Hanyo-420
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Come on, don't leave me hangin' like that, it's among the top five stories I've read as of yet!
person deazana
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I truly enjoyed that although I hated the rape scene but understand that it was necessary to the story plot. Can't wait for the next update.
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story so far... i hate punks like that.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! I read all the chapters in 15 minutes and am not liking that Sado guy one bit. Please tell me Inuyasha is going to gut him.
person hannah
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg,poor kagome.i cant wait to see what inu does tho,update soooooon!!!
person Ru-Doragon
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Longer chapters. Update soon. ^_^
person Ru-Doragon
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well her mom is doing the exact OPPOSITE of what she should be doing. Which is not washing away any remaining DNA evdience. My question for the jock though is, who's gonna believe the football star when his fist prints are matched to the ones on Kagome's body, huh? I know the police won't. -stares pointedly at author- I don't know about Kags but I would never forgive her gramps seeing as it was his fault for saying that she has dementia(sp) isn't it now. This is a great story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_^