rate_review Reviews

ROFLMAO!

There was no room for any other thing in his body, not even a thought as he tried to adjust to the sudden intrusion.
One of the best lines I've read!

This was great...and boy is Miroku ever in for it...

Ja!

Oh dear.
This was just terribly funny. You can't help but love the snarky backtalk the characters give the "narrator". I won't comment on the sex, because I'm sure you'll get plenty of feedback on the heat of that particular interaction. I just want to let you know how much I enjoyed the whole smirk-and-bitten-cheek tone of the story. And damned if I didn't start searching my brain for the original "fractured fairy-tales" (I'm coming up with the "Rocky and Bullwinkle Show", but hey, after a couple glasses of cognac that memory is not much good for anything!). Anyway, brava for a fun, erotic ride indeed!

Wow...that was amazing. I'm staring to love this Kouga/Inu or Sesshomaru action. :D :D Thanks for the fairy tale! :D Great story.

You put it up! Heh. You already know what I think, eh!

I still get a kick from the pink mini skit, LOL.