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for How the Pain Evolves

by LiquidFire89

person intrigued
schedule October 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oooooo, poor Inuyasha, hope there is more!
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you made this fic so dedicated to the characters in the actual series. It's refreshing to read a fanfic that is accurate. The cruel Sesshomaru, the emotionally distraught Inuyasha, the conflicting emotions with Kikyo and Kagome, and even Miroku and Sango! I can't wait for you to continue the series because I want to know how you can make this into a Sesshomaru/Inuyasha fic.
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“No one will ever want you, Inuyasha."
That's right! He doesn't have just ONE, but TWO possible mates vying for his attention! Booyah, Sess! lol So far I'm curious as to what's gonna happen... The sexual tension is so HIGH!!! XD Can't wait for yer next update, mate.
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love it!!! I want MORE! Please update soon ^_^ I love where this is going and how true to character you are keeping everyone.
person Henako
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah!
The pain!
How hurtful that is.
I cannot wait for a fourth chapter!
I want to congratulate you on creating both a story that successfully captures the reader (namely me) and makes them screaming for more as well as NOT mutilating the characters.
This story, unlike so many others I have read, preserves the feelings and actions of the characters AND actually creating a plot!
I will continue to read this story with absolute faithfullness
Cordially,
~Harlequin, Masked Deciever
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn.

This rocks, man.
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you are biulding up the plot I cannot wait to read the next chapter!
person wolfluv
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far sooooo Gooooood! Please update as soon as you can please!!! This last chapter had me sitting at the edge of my chair!!!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice. can't wait to see how you get them together.
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting chapter. I was so hooked by the intense emotion and feelings Inuyasha was experiencing. Every time I read a story about Inuyasha's insecurities, it makes me cry. He is so fragile and yet a strong individual. But I guess strong people need to hear sometimes that they are need and wanted. what you portrayed here was beautiful, Inuyasha is vunerable and Sesshoumaru ...as we all know him exploits that weakness. I hope Sesshoumaru regrets his ways to late. It's stories like this that make me want to hurt Sesshoumaru for being a pain in the behind. But I still love!!! lol Inuyasha is stonger than people give him credit for, I hope he shows Sesshoumaru.

I love the story and can't wait to read more.