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for There You'll Be

by LilAngel3840

schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it but the ending seems to be .... unthoughtful... and a tad forced and rushed you know?

I wrote a story SORT of like this..... it's called 'What hurts the most'
i think you should read it ^_^

good job.