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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the sound of this story. I would love to see more. I admit a little bit of uncertainty on the warning of the BDSM and DOM relationship ... I like the tender relationship they have right now. However, I will give anything a chance...
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Please continue and update soon.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Where's Chapter 2? and 3? and 4? lol, this is a good one, there were a few spelling errors but other than that I think it is well written, and I am very interested in seeing where this leads and what will happen. Please please please for the love of the Kami's continue!!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise of this story beacuse it seems to steam with possibilities....steam?? well hopefully you get what i mean lol. Please update soon beacuse i cant wait to see what happens next.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it and cannot wait to see what you write next, it is such a good story.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
reads good so far can't wait for more