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by HockeyFan26

person Samantha Lindale
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Was in any good?' you ask. HELL YEAH IT WAS GOOD!!! I would love for you to write more yuri cause you kick ass at it! It was a bit long, but I'm not complaining, tis a compliment! I don't like people who post really short one-shots. Loved it! Can't wait to read more. Love love love!

~Samantha~
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitely impressed. On top of having one of the longest love scenes that I've seen in a good long while, it's also got a story I actually like, given the setting. Normally I'm not a fan of the Inuyasha fics in a "current" setting, but I was pleased with this one. Definitely great work here, keep it up. ^_^
person Iyasu
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I absolutely loved this fic! I'm glad you decided to post it. I like how you actually had a lead-in to the sex. It was refreshing. There were a few misspelled words, but nothing major.
person O-Kyojiro
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow..this story is quite the read. One of the best I've seen in a long time..it's just so full of passion. *****
person iamsouledge
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was fucking awesome. Aside from the excellent smut (and it was definitely some great smut), your attention to the story and all of the little details was fantastic. I particularly liked how you handled the two girls' moments of revelation; I'm not sure why, but both of them seemed so...I don't know. Cute? Believable? Something along those lines. The Internet needs more wonderful writers such as yourself.

Now, get to writing more awesome shoujo-ai/yuri stories!
person Kurt Kine
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I realy liked the story. It proved quite effective in turning me on. If you could write more, please do. and if you already have wrote more, please tell me, so i may read them as well. I have no complaints about the story. If this is your first time with this kind of story, i want to see it get better! i hope you don't ridicule me and i will continue on with my reading now.

--Kurt Kine