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for My Hearts Desires

by immiko

schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
r u ever going to update this?
person Ruuka
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story, and i cant wait to read more when you come out with it : )
hope you update soon. Cuz this story is really interesting, i just have to keep reading ; )
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. It was so romantic and even though Sesshoumaru seemed to be far more open-minded, than he is displayed in the manga, it still is rather fitting. Though I am a bit dissappointed that Inuyasha`s group is not invited. I hope that the last chapter will be a really long one, and that you may already consider writing a sequel, about Rin`s adventures as lady of the Western Lands.
person orvida
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow what a great story when are you going to update this story and are you going to put a lemon scene in it?
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. You are a good writer. Please write more! :]
person WTW
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for a new chapter. As I was reading I was hoping for a moment were Rin would get tired from that passionate moment and Sessy would take over. You sure did well in meeting my expectations for that plot line. Great job. Keep it up.
person WTW
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD I hope that Sessy and Rin get together but these cliffys are killers. ^^ teehee, well keep up the great work!
person jenn2118
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it its getting exciting lol keep up the good work!
person jenn2118
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just keep doing what your doing!!
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, well. I must say! Very good for a first fic! I'm mighty proud! Although they're alittl short, I find them great. You'll do great with this one and I'm more than sure on any new one's you make! Please, keep me Updated on any new one's you pop out. I'm interesting in the work. Bravo to you!

Now make me proud and be creative! Hehehehehehe. I'm so excited good job!

Sesshomaru's in a basis character and so is Rin and I like that you kept her in good spirits. She's strong-willed. I like that alot. You're doing pretty freakin' awesome! Hehehehehhehe. Now Update before I have to attack with my chocolate milk! I put too much chocolate in it! Grrr...again.. -.-'''''''''Hehehehehehhehe.