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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You, sir, have crossed a line. Now the shadow wolf has been reawoken.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay.. seriously.. what is wrong with you? not only do you not know how to write a story.. but you didnt even come up with the material on your own.. you stole kageookami's Rough Lust story and turned it into crap.. you should be ashamed of yourself.. honestly.. i may not know how to write a fanfiction.. but i love to read them.. and this is crap.. get your own story
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ehh...
Not to discourage you, but you really have to improve on your writing. Stuff just happened. Out of character all over the place. Lack of capitalizing. Ohh God the lack of capitalization.
Honestly, it might be AFF, but it's a story. If you're gonna write it and expect people to want to read it, follow the guidelines of English 101. Proper capitalization and punctuation (I regretted clicking the link the minute I saw your disclaimer had a lowercase "i"), structure, grammar, etc.
And for the love of God, don't say "I'll write more if you want me to." Show some character, man!
Not to discourage you, but you really have to improve on your writing. Stuff just happened. Out of character all over the place. Lack of capitalizing. Ohh God the lack of capitalization.
Honestly, it might be AFF, but it's a story. If you're gonna write it and expect people to want to read it, follow the guidelines of English 101. Proper capitalization and punctuation (I regretted clicking the link the minute I saw your disclaimer had a lowercase "i"), structure, grammar, etc.
And for the love of God, don't say "I'll write more if you want me to." Show some character, man!
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whares the rough fun at? and here i thaught it was going to open with a bondage scene. oh well, its good so far anyway.