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for Desperately Wanting

by BeautifulOblivion

schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey gal pal I,ve watching inuyashu. I'm beginning to understand the story. "Desperatley Wanting" is a beauiful story. You have talent.
I will reveiw more later love Alyson
person chanda
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Lissa,

Yeah, I was able to rewiew one of your stories...I loved it the fluff was great! Are you going to continue this? Anyway whatever you decide...

Until next time,
Chanda
person Lord Of The Flames
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good one-shot.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. I wish that the ending had been a little longer, though. Maybe, just maybe, you could add another chappie to it? Like, what happens when Inuyasha finally gets a hold of Kagome; or what happens when the sun goes down and Shippo is asleep? Anyhoo, I did like this story. Well written. Keep up the good work
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely and delightful... a lighthearted snapshot.

thank you,
ginny