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for April Fool for the fools

by WalterKraken101

person Patricia_may
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...! Genius!! Pure genius!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! :D
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. Soooo funny. I do feel bad that Kagome got hurt, but I gotta feel kinda bad for Inu Yasha too in a way. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person madmiko
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just found this one -- whoa! Some really interesting twists and turns. I completely agree that Inuyasha wouldn't have thought about how that subjugation spell would hurt her, and of course, being human, it would. though i wonder why kagome couldn't take them off? After all, she IS Kikyo's reincarnation, which is how she controlled the beads in the first place. Oh well. I can't believe Sango pulled that prank on Kagome -- too funny! But, ew! Then Kag kissed HER! Ha! And what was up with Kag telling Inu SHE'S the Alpha of this pack? That was odd. Great that she had Shippou there to pull the stone statue prank, but what in the world is she up to now? I'm almost afraid to look! (Okay, maybe just a little peek. Heh heh!)
person WTW
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting turn of events. Please continue with your story hun. I'd like to see it through the end. Thank you for writing. ^^
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is funny! I hope thers more soon!
person Patricia_may
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a cruel prank he played on Kagome! What will InuYasha do now? Ha ha ha!! Kagome's prank was funny! *achoo*
person Temari20
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't care if Inuyasha feels bad. He needs to.