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for The right to breed

by Kinyana

person Patricia_may
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was kinda hoping it would be a DemonInu &Kag lemon, (don't really see that alot) but either way, that was pretty good for your first time. (that didn't sound right) O_o
person lady everest
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha-in-youkai-form and Kagome having sex would be interesting.

Die Kouga! Bwahahahahahahahahaha!
person 52895
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay pretty boring could have been more action I mean come on Inuyasha was just dumb I rate you a 1.
person madmiko
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, THAT was interesting. I liked the first chapter/prologue. And it figures that even after 5 months, inuyasha still hadn't done anything about his feelings for Kagome. Wonder how long that would have gone on if Kouga hadn't shown up? A fight to the death, huh? Oh, she's not going to like that. What possessed Inu to challenge Kouga for the right to IMPREGNATE her? Woo hoo! Guess Kag is in for a surprise in the next chapter -- can't wait!
person WTW
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events! Tsk tsk, that wolf prince sure could be pretty prideful. Should have known better. Please keep up with the story hun. Doing good.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please finish it
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
there are some errors..

But I'm awaiting the next chapter with anticipation my dear.
person You don't need to know
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice! kouga is dead!!!!!!!!! YEAH!
person biteswhenprovoked
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow i really like this story. the summery caught my attention and im glad it did. i will continue to read this one
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what happens next. Please, please, please update soon. I love this so far.