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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter. I like the way you told things through her journal/scrapbook. That was a nice way to do it.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
emi is my favorite name.. that's the name i use in my stories...
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! The story is awesome! I cant wait to find out what happens next and if the baby is a boy or a girl. Also just wondering (and if you're having problems with continuing the story something to look at) how does Koga's pack react to his death and are there going to be problems for the Inu gang later? I want to know and that might give you some ideas to work with. oh and when you up date could you send me a email saying that you have updated the story. Just put in the subject bar Update on Right To Breed and I'll know what you are talking about. Oh and my email is fangsoffury08@bellsouth.net Thanks
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow-- this is soo cute! I hope you update soon... plleeassse. Inuyasha is just so damned cute as a father..
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kagome & Inuyasha being REALLY sweet to each other? XP Thats one thing you won't see in the show or in the manga. (not yet anyways) :P Anywhoo! I hope you update soon!!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vey sexy. Are you going to add an epilogue to patch things up? I think we deserve an epilogue explaining what happens next, like what's to be of Kouga's pack or something.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I liked the way Sango and the others let Kagome know exactly what was going on. She sure didn't seem very upset about Kouga, did she? Poor wolf prince. The lemon was very tastefully written. Funny that Inuyasha was teasing her about her innocence -- we're supposed to think he's had a lot of experience? Or that he was just confident in following his instincts? Will there be more? Kagome did wonder if Kikyou had returned -- gonna do something with that? It was very interesting that you had him come back to himself before they did anything.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 -- WOW... That had me griped. Thanks
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for a lemony chapter. Good job. I'd suggest more details and a slower pace in area locations with that detail if you want the lemon to be really hot. Though you did an excelent job none the less of this one. Thank you for writing hun. Keep it up. ^^
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! So is that all? I hope not!! Id love to see where this is going..