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for The right to breed

by Kinyana

schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cute!
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! this story is sooo cute! Especially the ending(I was kinda sad about Kouga though, wish he hadn't died). I love the fact that you explained the meanings for the names that you have chosen. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Why not a sequel to this one? Inuyasha could finally get a pay-back for all of the times that he was mean to Shippo, and by way of his own daughter, too. Now that would be verrry interesting.
Keep up the good work.
person Geri
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! This is definately a story that if you decided to rewrite it you could exted it to quite a few more chapters. I was sad to see it end. But, sequals are great tooo. ;D
person InuYoukai
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Finish to a Great Story. Cannot wait for the next one.
person Sherry
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome ending to the story and I am so glad that it ended the way it did. Great job and cant wait to see what you come up with next! Just let me know when you put a new story out! you probably know the address by now so i wont write it! Great job.
person Patricia_may
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's over already?? It was great while it lasted.... Um, you could write a AU fic that takes place in Kagome's time... uh Inuyasha is killed in the final battle w/ Naraku, so Kagome goes back home, devastated. After her school is done, she goes to college & meets... well... I sorta got the idea from a one-shot! "Samsara" u should read it! It should still be on this site! It might give u a idea! Plus mine! *runs away*
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! ^_^ can't wait till the epilogue!
person Patricia_may
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When I first started this chapter, I thought it was a auther's note. :P Anyway I like the names! Especially Aiko, Akio, Kenji, Kumiko, Kenichi, Takeshi, and Natsumi....do women really want to maim their husbands during labor!? LOL! Also I hope I don't have twins, cause it runs on my dad's side, and I'm next generation since my aunt never had any....*whines*
person Sherry
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, it got a lot of laughs out of me especially when Kagome wanted to maim inuyasha for making her pregnate! I loved it and if you could just send me another email when you get the epiloge up, thanks. fangsoffury08@bellsouth.net
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This was just too cute for wordssss...