rate_review Reviews

Just saw this story and thought I'd give it a whirl. It's in the Inuyasha category, but I'm not sure who your main characters are -- your OCs and Kurama? I like the background story where Kurama was thinking about Kuronue's fiancee. Nice way to add some depth. So, what pairings do you have in mind? For IY/YYH, my favorite couple is Hiei/Kagome. Will the YYH gang meet up with Kagome and the others soon? Looking forward to seeing what you have in mind for this.

wow, that was quick!!

poor girl! i like how you are developing your new characters... i don't mind non-canon characters as long as they aren't the blatent 'mary sue'... of course i like to see some dimention in the personality of all the characters... you are doing a good job with that.

thank you,
ginny

i am assuming that kaede knows at least what direction yasha and kagome went.

if short chapters mean that you'll be updating sooner, then short chapters are good.

thank you,
ginny

iy/yyh crossovers are too few and too far between...

this has potential, well written... i am intreiged.

suggestion: put an extra space between paragraphs, it not only makes it look pretty but easier to read.

keep it up!! i am interested in seeing where you are taking this and eagerly anticipate future updates.

thank you,
ginny