rate_review Reviews

Well, the first chapter i must say, to me it was kindov boring.
Me personally, i like alot of lemon. Well not alot, just lemon with a sotyrline. But not minor lemon, minor lemon distubs me O_O
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LOL, i should like a perv. But its soo not my fault, i just really like lemon, lol.

Hi, I would like to offer my assistence in proof reading your story. I think it could be a hundred times better with just a few minor tweaks. If you would like, email me with the first chapter and I will beta it to show you what kind of improvements can be made. :D

Wow, that's a fantastic story! I hope u can make a sequel of it ... somewhat the story goes with the adventures of their kids (well, that may also incl. their 3rd pup). 'Nywei, I luv it, TC and ciao!!!

I'm sad it's ending so soon, but I am pleased with the over all story! Great!!

Well I am guessing it has something to do with Rin, otherwise she would not have been in there. And to what I think it is, is that he wants Rin. Not too sure he wants her as a mate or not since demons don't like humans but then again Sesshoumaru seems to like having her around and maybe he will too, but then wouldn't that make Sesshoumaru jealous? To let someone else have her. I can't wait to find out.

not bad plzz write more

It was very very good and i hope to see more real soon. Rin is such a cutie and Sessh loves her rather or not he admits heheh