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man .... i hope he does forgive is older brother ... hmm maybe sess should tell horai what happen to saskai when he was little then horai may under stand better why he left ..... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

~lol~ awww tisa likes saskai ... rin will go head over heals for her .... i hope after they get home sess shows that he was scared for his son .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

wow im glad they made up ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

omg omg ! these chapters keep getting better and better!! i am glad that ur story is getting more interesting by each story!@ i hope u will have a few more chp to come ^_^

omg i lvoe this story! and i hope u will continue this good story to a good ending. and i would like to know what happens next after he marked rin as his mate ^_^ oh please update soon

Little Rin is very cute in her innonence and that would give an enough good story with the thoughts of the characters well described, BUT, because there is one, a very big one, you have to find a beta for all the mistakes. Although, being french, english is a foreign language for me, I would say that for us, readers, too much is unbearable : we can't avoid to be disturbed by the corrections automatically done by the mind while reading... Do you understand ? Don't feel harassed please, I say that to hels you. Do you know that you use "their" in all the corners ! Where I want to read "they're", "there" or even "here", I always find "their". Maybee you can change it easily ?

On the other part, in the story, it seems to me that, well, Rin could be a little to young to the taste of the AFF's moderators. If you change that, I'm sure the story will be more right, but, sure, I am not the creator of the plot.

Keep your courage, I wait the following chapters !

Bonjour de France,

A french mother and reader,
Merely Truth

wow ... soo is the pup is 3/4 then ... hmmm how will they know for sure if he is a full blood and what is sess going to do .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

This is a really good story. please update soon. can't wait to see what happens next.

OMG I hope you update really soon, because I just love this story. It's just wonderful. I adore Sesshomaru and Rin is so sweet. They are perfect together and I would love to read some more. Please please update... like now or later today or like early tomorrow. lol. Take care and thanks for writing a great story. Keep up the good work.

wow that was great .. i love that hen help rin out and mated with her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel