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July 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM
This was a good story! I hope you return to finish it!
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May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
continue with your story of Sesshomaru and rin which is on adult fanfiction leverages and puts that story in fanfction net that has this couple love stories varies too much this story continues. kissus
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May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
continue with your story of Sesshomaru and rin which is on adult fanfiction leverages and puts that story in fanfction net that has this couple love stories varies too much this story continues. kissus
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story hope you can finish it!!
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UM M'am I would appreciate if you didn't hold out on me. I need another chapter to satisfy my Sess and Rin lust.
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is indeed heartwarming ... which centers on the family in particular. I am looking forward to more intriguing "twists" and i hope this will not end up in tragedy (like one of sesshy's boys will be killed?!! gee ... I hate that ... honestly!!!) ... but a happy ending (or maybe an interesting love stories of these hanyous ;P). Anyways, thanks for the constant updates, keep it up and TC! Ciao! ;)
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't mean to nit pic but wasn't this a Rin and Sess. fanfic. There was really only a small portion of Rin and Sess. relationship. I would like to see more interaction between the two. These last two chapters I really just skemmed through.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ... is he going to go back and tell is fater that his brother has joined with scar... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with Merely Truth, you need a beta. I honestly couldn't get past the first paragraph because of all the gramatical errors. You have a really nice writing style, great descriptions and you could become a really awesome writer if you just train yourself to use proper grammar and punctuation.
I'm just begining to write myself and a tool I use a lot is http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/ This site has been very helpful to me because I tend to use the wrong tenses a lot.
Just brush up your skills a bit and you'll be a really great story teller!
I'm just begining to write myself and a tool I use a lot is http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/ This site has been very helpful to me because I tend to use the wrong tenses a lot.
Just brush up your skills a bit and you'll be a really great story teller!
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Saskai has a girl firend hehehe