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for This is Gonna be a Pain in the Ass

by szaugg

person Mary
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please write the next chapter! I'm super anxious to find out what happens
person otaku
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really luv this story. Aww now kag mom will never find out
person Mary
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey - loved it so far... PLEASE ADD A NEW CHAPTER SOON :)
person bunny
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story so much! the sequel rocks also! oo i hope u finish it sotry i cant wait 2 see what happens next. i hope they are able to fix the well! :-D
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I cant wait until you write the rest. By the way, you are officially one of the best if not the best author I have read. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the rest.
person madmiko
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was so nice to see a new chapter of this story!! I don't know how I missed it when you posted. Thank goodness for the IYFG or I wouldn't have known until you posted again! This was a sadly sweet little point in the story. I loved Kohaku confronting Miroku like he did, -- the way he pointed out all the monk's faults was hilarious! And of all the accusations agasinst him, the one that he REALLY had to protest was the shifty eyes comment. LOL!! And then he had to appeal to Sango to confirm that his eyes were indeed handsome. Vanity, thy name is Miroku. ^_^

Then Inu had to get all angsty about Kagome's baby comment. We all knew what she meant, but he's still so insecure. THEN, he had to go and mention that she's probably stuck there. I loved the running dialogue with himself. "Why didn't you stop me?" "I didn't know what you were going to say!" TOO funny! And then he promised to fix the well if it doesn't work. He's hopeless. ^_^ I'll be keeping an eye out for your NEXT update!
person Dan
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH HA! You've updateed here to!
1st off: Will\can you post this (censored) on your fanfiction account?
2nd-ly What is that move? when will it appear?
Keep it going!
Good luck.
person Jwelstone
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey this was really really great. I so totally loved 'This is gonna be fun!' and now i love the sequel even more! Update soon ok. :-D
person Nolan
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another GREAT chapter, can't wait for the next! I always love everything you do, except for the yoai (or whatever) stuff, I'm not really into that stuff... but I love Keerento! I've been a follower since the beginning and hope to see more good stories from you!

Keep it up,
Nolan
person Kuromei
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whee! An update! XD *dances* I don't normally read het fics on this site, but I like this one. You make it a lot more interesting than the actual show. =3