rate_review Reviews

Ok i like the plot and the story is good and well written. and i give kudos to any auther who can put their story online for everyone to read. it seems to me though that the original character that you made up is becomeing a bigger part then the characters from the show. like for example besides the two or three paragraphs where sesshomaru is fighting inuyasha your original character is in every part of the story and is a big part of everything that happens. but im not going to lie im not a big fan of original characters there are only a few stories where i like them. i dont mean to sound like im bitching you out cause im not like i said i give kudos to anyone who can put their story on here, but that is just my opion. but my intrest is struck and i think i will look out for this fic in the future to see what will happen.

curious as to why you haven't recieved any recognition for this fic, it's really good! i don't normally go for many non-canon characters as they usually seem a bit like maryjanes to me... but you've given these ones personality and i kinda identify with ash the 'crazy human' character. >=P

well written, what's going on with kagome on the other side of the well?

thank you,
ginny

hahaha... i said maryjanes instead of marysues... i'm such a fool!

XD

I HATE mary sues but I'll give you a run down on my opinion overlooking that fact. Hey, some people must like em and I guess your one of em. Anyway I like your style of writting. It grabs a person's attention and keeps them reading whether they like it or not. =3 I know because I was hooked from the start and I hate original characters.... let's see.. I like the plot as well, it's not that original, but it's more original than having Inuyasha and Kagome trapped in her world and there they fall in love and only afterwords get to go back. Who knows, maybe your story will change my opinion of mary sues. Keep up the beautiful work!